revisions

[egypturnash]

I revised the King of Wands. Thanks for the commentary, folks; you gave me a bunch of things to think about!

These manly cards are just hard for me to do. On to the last one...

Comments

[zeeth_kyrah]

Whereas I feel slightly overwhelmed; the balance of the card seems to me to now be more emphatically on the character instead of also noting his accomplishment.