revisions

[egypturnash]

I revised the King of Wands. Thanks for the commentary, folks; you gave me a bunch of things to think about!

These manly cards are just hard for me to do. On to the last one...

Comments

[dagoski.livejournal.com]

But your male characters do come out very well. The male characters are very striking in this deck because they contrast with the rest.

[shatterstripes.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

I can draw them pretty well; I just don't get into their heads without a lot of work. Doing it right is hard.

[kajarainbow.livejournal.com]

It's very large improvement--the slight offness I felt about the card is gone.

[zeeth_kyrah]

Whereas I feel slightly overwhelmed; the balance of the card seems to me to now be more emphatically on the character instead of also noting his accomplishment.