Oh, psst... mysterious shadowy figure... rapiers have two edges also... sabers have one edge, epees and foils just have points. Er, yes, metaphor, shutting up now.
Panel two would read better as "the package is being dropped off" if the figure was inverted to the left. Since we read left to right, we see the package first, and thus think "the package is being taken". Maybe. 8)
Glad you enjoyed it. This first page is kinda stiff, as first parts of a sequence can be...
...and if you like my line art you might enjoy the trove of sketchbook scans. Some people write deep essays on philosophy in their web journals, some go on about politics, some discuss technology... I intersperse my life and thoughts with weird stuff I draw on the bus.
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Date: 2004-07-13 02:06 pm (UTC)Oh, psst... mysterious shadowy figure... rapiers have two edges also... sabers have one edge, epees and foils just have points. Er, yes, metaphor, shutting up now.
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Date: 2004-09-10 12:07 am (UTC)...and if you like my line art you might enjoy the trove of sketchbook scans. Some people write deep essays on philosophy in their web journals, some go on about politics, some discuss technology... I intersperse my life and thoughts with weird stuff I draw on the bus.