Date: 2005-04-07 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eselgeist.livejournal.com
no clue what this is about, but the wording isn't flowing to my 'ear', i think this:

"...words drip from her lips like Montezuma's revenge"

has a smoother cadence and still makes all the same imagery points - and rather disturbing imagery, i might add. cool turn of phrase though. ^_^
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