I've got a Graphic Novel where that is used. A recent "World of Tomorrow" thing, or something that starred a character called Greycloak I think. I can tell you the name if you really care at home.
I once wrote a short story like that actually. It had the narrative of events across 2/3s of the page, and the other third had the "computer" view of the commands going through the cyborg that was participating in the action. Acquire target, arm, stand down, sort of stuff that fleshed out the 3rd person view of the scene it was involved in.
It was more fancy than functional, but still I tried.
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Date: 2006-08-30 08:09 pm (UTC)I once wrote a short story like that actually. It had the narrative of events across 2/3s of the page, and the other third had the "computer" view of the commands going through the cyborg that was participating in the action. Acquire target, arm, stand down, sort of stuff that fleshed out the 3rd person view of the scene it was involved in.
It was more fancy than functional, but still I tried.