1) Careful with the flourishes on the text. A couple go a long way, and several go way too far. The closing quote marks practically disappear into the flourish of the 'd'.
2) The wallpaper texture is misaligned with the angle of the wall enough to cause disorientation, and not the good sort. I'd put just enough perspective effect on it to make sure it fit with the rest of the lines, and then it would be perfect.
Other than that, I love the piece. The crosshatching to add shading to the bookshelf works well, I think.
no subject
Date: 2005-11-29 05:30 pm (UTC)1) Careful with the flourishes on the text. A couple go a long way, and several go way too far. The closing quote marks practically disappear into the flourish of the 'd'.
2) The wallpaper texture is misaligned with the angle of the wall enough to cause disorientation, and not the good sort. I'd put just enough perspective effect on it to make sure it fit with the rest of the lines, and then it would be perfect.
Other than that, I love the piece. The crosshatching to add shading to the bookshelf works well, I think.