If I were to crit anything, it'd to maybe trim down the volume of smoke from the revolver. Other than that I can't find fault with it. Beautiful composition; I love broken edgelines. The tilt of the frame (plus the palette) makes me think of early 60s British TV melodrama, for some reason.
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Date: 2005-11-29 03:48 pm (UTC)Friggin' splendid. ;)